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The road across the field

Fifteen minutes across the field instead of forty on the road. Someone to the left keeps exactly your pace.

Lines: 31 · about 98 s of video · Village

  1. YouCutting across the field
  2. ThemIt is late. You should take the road
  3. YouThe road is forty minutes, this is fifteen
  4. ThemGo on then
  5. YouListen, somebody is walking parallel to me
  6. pause 1.5 s
  7. ThemPeople walk there, it is a public field
  8. YouHe keeps exactly my pace
  9. I stop and he stops
  10. ThemSpeed up
  11. YouI did. So did he
  12. pause 1.2 s
  13. ThemHow far away
  14. YouForty metres. On my left
  15. ThemPut your torch on him
  16. YouI did. Nobody there
  17. pause 1.8 s
  18. ThemThen you imagined it
  19. YouI can hear steps in the stubble
  20. And the dog did not imagine it
  21. ThemWhat dog
  22. YouThe neighbour’s followed me from the gate
  23. She is growling to the left and will not go on
  24. pause 1.5 s
  25. ThemGo back to the road
  26. YouThe road is twenty minutes behind me
  27. ThemThen run forward
  28. pause 1.2 s
  29. YouRunning
  30. He is running
  31. ThemHow much further
  32. YouI can see the village lights
  33. pause 1.8 s
  34. Listen, why does he only run when I run
  35. ThemDo not think about it. Just run
  36. pause 1.5 s
  37. YouI have been standing still for a minute
  38. The steps have not stopped

How it works

Fifteen minutes instead of forty: the character chose the short way himself. The dog is there so the reader believes that more than one of them imagined it.

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