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The station not on the timetable

The night train stopped at a platform with a single lamp. After Kirov there are no stops for six hours.

Lines: 32 · about 100 s of video · Ghost town

  1. YouOn the night train. We have stopped
  2. ThemWhere
  3. YouNo idea. There is a platform and one lamp
  4. ThemRead the sign
  5. YouThe letters have worn off. All that is left is "ovka"
  6. pause 1.5 s
  7. ThemAsk the attendant
  8. YouThe attendant is asleep
  9. I knocked, he will not open
  10. ThemWhat about the other passengers
  11. YouThe carriage is empty
  12. pause 1.2 s
  13. ThemYou said the carriage was full
  14. YouIt was full until Kirov
  15. ThemHow long have you been standing
  16. YouForty minutes
  17. pause 1.8 s
  18. ThemCheck the timetable, what comes after Kirov
  19. YouI did. After Kirov there are no stops for six hours
  20. ThemThen you are standing in a field
  21. YouThere is a man on the platform
  22. With a suitcase. Waiting
  23. pause 1.5 s
  24. ThemLet him wait
  25. YouHe is looking into my window
  26. He has been looking into my window the whole time
  27. ThemClose the curtain
  28. pause 1.2 s
  29. YouClosed
  30. The train is moving
  31. ThemGood
  32. pause 1.8 s
  33. YouHe is in the carriage
  34. ThemIn the carriage how
  35. YouSitting in his seat
  36. ThemWhich seat is his
  37. pause 1.5 s
  38. YouHis ticket has my seat on it
  39. And my surname

How it works

The empty carriage and the man on the platform belong to different times, and that is the whole construction. The ticket at the end explains why he was watching that window.

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