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District eight

The courier got an order for district eight. The city has seven, and past the ring road there is fresh asphalt and light in the windows.

Lines: 32 · about 104 s of video · Ghost town

  1. YouI got an order for district eight
  2. ThemWe have seven
  3. YouThat is what I thought
  4. There is an address, a building, a pin on the map
  5. ThemSend me a screenshot
  6. YouSent
  7. pause 1.5 s
  8. ThemThat is past the ring road. It is a field
  9. YouThe map says building 4, entrance 2, flat 33
  10. ThemCancel it
  11. YouCancelling costs me three hundred
  12. ThemCancel it anyway
  13. pause 1.2 s
  14. YouI am already driving. The road is fine
  15. Fresh asphalt
  16. ThemThere is no asphalt past the ring road
  17. YouThere is now
  18. pause 1.8 s
  19. ThemWhat can you see
  20. YouBuildings. Five of them. Lights in the windows
  21. There is a radio playing in the yard
  22. ThemWhat radio
  23. YouI do not know. An old song
  24. pause 1.5 s
  25. I went up. Flat 33
  26. They opened at once, as if they had been at the peephole
  27. ThemWho opened
  28. pause 1.2 s
  29. YouA woman. She said "at last"
  30. She took the order and signed the receipt
  31. ThemThen drive off
  32. YouDriving
  33. pause 1.8 s
  34. Listen, the app still shows the order as undelivered
  35. ThemIt happens. Sync
  36. YouIt says "courier did not arrive"
  37. pause 1.5 s
  38. And the order date: 14 June 2009
  39. Tony, I cannot get out of this courtyard

How it works

An ordinary shift leads to an address that does not exist. The order date moves the story out of the present and into the past, and the car stays in the courtyard.

Every story here is fiction. Any resemblance to real people or events is coincidental.