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The basement that is not on the plan

The building plan shows no basement, and under the stairs a door stands open above forty steps down.

Lines: 33 · about 101 s of video · Abandoned house

  1. YouThis building has a basement and the plan has none
  2. ThemWhat plan
  3. YouThe technical one, I got it from the management office
  4. Solid foundation. No basement
  5. ThemThen what is that door
  6. YouA door under the stairs. Standing open
  7. pause 1.5 s
  8. ThemAnd what is behind it
  9. YouSteps going down
  10. ThemDo not go
  11. YouI went down yesterday
  12. ThemAnd
  13. YouI counted forty steps
  14. pause 1.2 s
  15. ThemNo basement is that deep
  16. YouThat is two and a half floors down
  17. ThemDid you reach the bottom
  18. YouNo. I turned back
  19. pause 1.8 s
  20. ThemGood
  21. YouTonight the door is open again
  22. The woman downstairs says there is no door
  23. ThemWell, the plan agrees with her
  24. YouShe lives on the first floor
  25. And she says this building has no first floor
  26. pause 2.0 s
  27. ThemWhat
  28. YouYou heard me
  29. ThemWhich floor are you on
  30. YouThe fourth
  31. pause 1.5 s
  32. ThemAnd how high does the lift go
  33. YouThe third
  34. pause 1.2 s
  35. ThemSo there is one floor too many
  36. YouOr one missing
  37. pause 1.8 s
  38. I am on the steps again
  39. ThemDo not count
  40. YouForty two already

How it works

The story is built on numbers that refuse to agree: forty steps, a lift that stops at the third floor, a neighbour on the first. The count carries on after the last line.

Every story here is fiction. Any resemblance to real people or events is coincidental.