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The keys to number twelve

Among his grandmother’s things he found keys tagged with an address demolished in 1998. The paper on the tag is new.

Lines: 32 · about 98 s of video · Abandoned house

  1. YouI was going through my grandmother’s things
  2. Found keys tagged "8 River Street, flat 12"
  3. ThemGo and have a look
  4. You8 River Street was demolished in 1998
  5. ThemThen it is just a keepsake
  6. YouIt is her handwriting, but in ballpoint
  7. And the paper is new
  8. pause 1.5 s
  9. ThemShe passed in March
  10. YouIn March
  11. ThemWhat is at that address now
  12. YouA new block. There is a flat 12
  13. pause 1.2 s
  14. ThemDo not even think about it
  15. YouI am already in the courtyard
  16. ThemVlad
  17. YouThe entry door opened with her key
  18. pause 1.8 s
  19. ThemGet out of there
  20. YouIt smells of her perfume
  21. They stopped making it thirty years ago
  22. ThemI am calling you
  23. YouDo not pick up
  24. ThemWhat
  25. pause 1.5 s
  26. YouNot you. A phone is ringing in the flat
  27. A landline, on the wall
  28. ThemDo not answer it
  29. pause 1.2 s
  30. YouIt will not stop
  31. I answered
  32. ThemWho is it
  33. pause 1.8 s
  34. YouMy grandmother
  35. She is asking whether I brought the keys
  36. ThemTell her you came to the wrong door
  37. pause 1.5 s
  38. YouNo time
  39. She is already opening it

How it works

There is not a single jump scare: a tag, a smell, a telephone on the wall. Each piece is explicable on its own; only together do they leave no version standing.

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